Violins great! Orcestra sense, Good beat.
4.25 / 5.00 (+ 0.0045)
Sick flow with this beat; builds up nicely.
Violins great! Orcestra sense, Good beat.
4.25 / 5.00 (+ 0.0045)
Sick flow with this beat; builds up nicely.
thanks man, appreciate it.
Shame the quality is shit
cause the lyrics are dope; real original and complex (not your everyday rap lines). The flow is also different, in a good way. I peeped some of your other tracks and its real clear hearing the development you've made in the flow department. There were a few lines that came out awkward, but for a WIP this has potential.
Keep up brother
-HDC
Thanks man. Yeah, It is such a shame that I dont have better equipment. Over time at my new job ill get the money and youll start hearing a lot of top notch music. Just for now its paying to get in to the studio, instead of making my own home studio.
I appreciate the review man.
Wow...
This is some powerful music here. Your flow is insane, but a few words seems a bit rushed (only a few though). The lyrics are real deep and creative. The hook is so sick. Dude, this is some of the best hip hop I've heard out of the QC! Props brother.
Wow.
Thanks man!
Remember hearing this on ya myspace, years ago...
Can really feel the emotion in your voice. The first verse sets up the situation very well, the second establishes the emotion of the rapper, the third wraps it all up. I can see the purpose for the straight-forward and rather simple hook, and for the most part it works very well. The slower flow compliments the lyrics and tone of this track. The lyrics are a bit undelevoped, but for an 18 yr old, they're decent.
Leave the Sad Days in the past, today is the time for optimism and hope.
Crazy what a lil time and practice can do to change one's life and skills, no?
Great build up...
Im really starting to get an appreciation for this type of music. The way this particular track builds up is really nice. It tends to get a lil bit repetitive though, I'm aware that this the way most trance songs tend to be, but maybe a break down in the middle with some audio clips from an old movie/TV show/or anyt other type of media would add a little bit of flare to this. My favourite part of this track is the piano, I think it really fit with the mood and the rest of the composition. Well done Adjeye-3, and I hope you have a wonderful day.
actually I was sleeping when you gave me the review.. But thanks man :). Yeah I need to work on my hooks, to make it less repetive...
BTW my piano is my speciallity, in a week of 3 I got a keyboard so the piano pieces will actually sound natural then :).
Climatic!
Love the build up on this...and then when that beat drops, daaaaaaaaamn! This be some good music to chill to on the deck whilst enjoying the fresh air and mech-dragon battles.
ta very much
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Great flow to start with; thought the vocs got a bit drowned when competing with those Bond trumpets. The ending with the talking bit works real well with the idea of this being an intro. Really liking the sounds you got coming from ya camp.
Great observation. need to tone down the intro (The hook was Placeholder.) Thank you for your sincere, constructive criticism.
Decent...
Props to Geordie with the sick beat. The freestyle had parts that flowed, but then the pauses kill it. The recording quality is garbage, sounds like both vocals and instrumental were recorded in one track. If you separate em, or just record vocals, and place em with the beat, you'll get a lot better quality. You got a decent voice for rapping, but the low energy and dragged flow don't do you justice. Keep em droppin Acoustatic
If this was a freestlye then did you write out the lyrics after you recorded the freestyle? Or is this a freewrite?
Hey thanks for the feedback man, much appreciated.
Yeaah my energy was really low, it was pretty late and everyone in the house was asleep so i had to stay quiet :P
Really true about the recording quality, im working with a laptop mic right now. By Christmas im getting an actual, decent quality mic and that's when shit's gonna get real haha.
It was a freewrite actually, wrote it during class in a few minutes and recorded it way later in the day.
Expect more in the future, peace
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