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[[B] - Illuminated Part 2]

Elevated blessing

Really liked the rhyme scheme you got established in this one. The consecutive (repeated rhyme sounds in close proximity) rhymes are dope.
"...head up on a pike// stabbed them in the abdomen repeatedly, we Vlad the scenery..." This was my favourite line, though if you didn't post the lyrics I would've missed the historical reference; maybe throwing in wordplay on "impale" would make that reference aurally resonate better. Just a thought. Your flow is definitely unique and has style; one thing that caught my ear was some of the syllables being stretched in order to fit in the beat. With all the syllables in your bars, it's easy to rush them, but you managed to keep it steady, one iffy part was ;" were the only ones that gain during acid rain that stains terrain" you got emphasis on the critical words, but "that" is slurred, which results in the line being misunderstood.

Props to benjadaninja, this is a grimey mo fo beat! Your lyrics work well with the gritty nature of the beat. Nice work Blest, keep up this steady elevation of your skills! Peace bro

HeIsAlive responds:

Thanks man. I appreciate the review.
The next songs ill be releasing will hopefully keep the steady increase statement alive, lol. They will have other people from my town who rap, as well as different flows and styles from all rappers ( including me ). Every song will have a unique flow to it from me, and the featured artists will have their own original sound as well.

What Im saying is, thanks and I hope you like my new stuff coming out in the near future, hopefully it surpases your current standard of my music :D

[Shootas]

nice!!

bout to drop some frees with some friends on this.. 5d!

Klazik

bat-man187 responds:

Koool Holmes

[Walter Kovacs]

HARD HITS HADOUKEN CYPHER!!!!

sHIT i GET BIBLICAL <- THAT FLOW RIGHT THUR IS SO DOPE! OVERALL THOUGH, REAL SICK RANDOM TRACK BRO. YOU FLOW WITH THE BEAT SOLIDILY, OR FLUIDLY, YOU PICK. THE CLARITY, FOR THE MOST PART WAS GOOD, BUT THERE MAY HAVE BEEN A FEW IFFY BITS, THIS IS BUMPIN ON LAPTOP SPEAKERS SO I COULD BE WRONG.

MY KEYBOARD ISN'T F'D, IM JUST AN ASS THAT TYPES IN CAPS. GO FIGGA

Luke responds:

YO MAN REAL GLAD YA FEELING IT I STRAIGHT MURKED THAT MIC TODAY YAAA ADIGGG???/

HONESTLY THOUGH - I KNOW THAT A FEW PARTS WERE A BIT FUCKED - I RUSHED THE MIXING AND SHIT, IT'S JUST A TRACK Y'KNOW ... I'M NOT SHOOTING FOR A MEDAL WITH THIS ONE - BUT I AM WALKING ON THE MOON WITH TYRANTS AND ORPHANS LATER TONIGHT SO IF YOU WANNA DROP SOME CYPHER WIT MY BOYS A DURBZ AND P SQAUTS GET AT ME...

[Adjeye-3 ~ Forlorn kid.]

Mythalogical Lore

WOW! Love how its starts out very hobbiton, and then the RAVE HITS THE SHIRE!!!! The meshing of the styles is very unorthodox, but I can really dig it. I would be dancing to this if I wasn't so tired right now, Nice work brother. Keep at it Adjeye-3!

Adjeye responds:

Thanks man :P sure I will keep it up :P