Head bobber rigth here!
The beat is infectious! The flow is rolling and the chops are so dope! You got a real interesting voice bro, definitely got something unique going on here.
As for your comment about the shitii assholes on NG... I dont understand how anyone could be giving these tracks that low of a score, some people are just fucks I guess...
Def keep at this brother, this is so ill!
Underground Sounds Here.
"Ask em for a freestyle, they say they'll be right back." Love that line, and it really speaks to the path that hip hop has been going these days; people say they hip hop, but when it comes to showing there style, they go and rehearse in a closet.
As for some comments on this track:
Russ's flow is decent; it's steady and his enunciation is crisp. The hook is so smooth! J-Solo brings a nice change up in tone, I like how he ends his verse. If I was to give ya'll some critique I'd say work on throwing in some more complex rhyme schemes and multi-syllable rhymes in there. A few of the adlibs seemed a bit off, example, "No MTV or radio" <- its panned to the left and when it cuts out, it drowns out the next line.
I love the beat; this is sampled from Rocky right? If it is, SICK! If not... its sick regardless! The drums were a bit too basic, but they served the purpose and drove the track steady.
Props on these maneuvers brothers, and thanks for the shout out. We gonna keep hip hop real, peace.
Sick.
Really like the rhyme scheme you got going on. The flow and delivery is decent; only part I had to squint (with me ears) was @ about 1:30, sounded a bit rushed there. The hook is really good. I"-I-I-i need a steady place to be.' <- Sick! Hmm...theres one wording choice that Im not sure about, "my motherfucking birth". Nice work twreckz, find that foundation brother.
ay thanks alot man. yeah i dont know ive been rapping for a little less then a year basicly. and not too good at this recording stuff. but i do try my best and im glad you gave me some good constructive criticism. thanks man. check out all my tracks and the ones ill be posting soon.
WTF Newgrounds!
Why does this have sound a low score? I know that answer...
I really like the gritty underground feel on this cut. The beat is really different, I like that. The rap flows, but it could be amped a bit, its a bit difficult to catch some of it.
Real tight track Epitome.
Thanks.
Yeah I Didnt Master The Verse, So It's Drowned Out At Some Parts, But I Think The Track Gets The Job Done For Now.
Thanks Again For Listening
Wow.
You're mother is a lucky woman to have you as a son. These kinda of songs remind why I love hip hop (and art in general) so much. The hook is straight up powerful; so much passion. I will pray for your mother's health bro.
Keep up OxyJin.
Sick build up...
and then the beat kicks in with the vocal chops! SICK! I really like the drum sound you got on this; it sounds so full and has depth. Normally I dont like an over usage of cymbal crashes, but i think this beat used them well. Sick work DJ Moose, this is illin
yo thanks for the review man! appreciate it!
Sick rhymes
You got the rhymes down packed, and for the most part the flow is decent. I like the abstract yet direct lyrics real sick mix of it here. I'd say work on your delivery so that you can make those lyrics stick in the listeners ears, right now, your very monotone, sounds almost like your bored; with practice you'll learn how really get into the words your flowing. Keep at it Freestyle Uprising.
This track isnt a freestyle is it?
Thank you so much man!
It was gonna be a few freestyles chopped together, but I liked the beat to much, so I wrote something. I really appreciate feedback, and I agree I should work on my flow.
Between being tired, and the chill calm beat, I just didn't put the energy I should have into the flow.
Again Thanks so much!
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